Sunday, March 28, 2010
Blog 4 "Lines Written in Early Spring" by W. Wordsworth
"What has man made of man." line 8
(a pun for man made) brings back some sad memories. The persona, really feels linked to nature (pathetic fallacy) but modernisation has severed their tie with nature.
The boundary in this poem acually isn't a boundary but the lack of one as shown in the fourth stanza...
"The birds around me hopped and played,
Their thoughts I cannot measure:-
But least the motion which they made
It seemed a thrill of pleasure."
There is a rhyme scheme in this poem, it being 'abab' (that is for the first stanza other wise I'd end up filling the page... maybe :-] )
Michael Parkes 8.1
Blog 3 "She Who Knows No Boundaries" by LaTiefa Alston
The poem shoves the racial, emotional, spiritual,and moral of LaTiefa's life in your face and commands your attention.
The ending to the poem to me is quite effective but is it totally neccesary. I mean it does come across like she is screaming at her audience. SEE IF I DO THIS TO YOU, YOU WOULD FEEL AS IF I WAS SHOUTING AT YOU!!!
So in a calm voice I find that the poem is great except if I SHOUT at the end.
Michael Pakes 8.1
Saturday, March 27, 2010
Blog 2 "I Dream a World" by Langdon Hughes
"I dream a world where man
No other man will scorn"
"I dream a world where all
Will know sweet freedom's ways"
Hughes repeats 'I dream a world' as though trying to make a statement. He also has two types of boundaries; Moral Boundaries, such as our greed, and Racial Boundaries, such as the colour of our skin doesn't matter.
Hughes uses language tequnigues such as similes...
"And joy, like a pearl"
And personification...
"Where wretchedness will hang its head"
To get the readers of the poem thinking. He also uses a ryhme scheme of 'abcb'. I enjoyed reading this poem and hearing the views of Hughes, which i couldn't agree more with.
Michael Parkes 8.1
Blog 1 'Mending Wall' by Robert Frost
"Something there is that doesn't love a wall,
That wants it down. I could say "Elves"to him" (35-36)
The neighbour is faithful to his father's saying' "Good fences make good neighbours." although the persona, who isn't Frost, feels no need for a wall due to the fact that they own trees not animals, which is stated in lines 23-26.
While rebuilding the wall an allusion to tennis is given
"Oh, just another kind of out-door game,
One on a side." (21-22)
And they always stay on their side of the wall
"We keep the wall between us as we go.
To each the boulders that have fallen to each..." (14-15)
This poem sort of contradicts itself because the persona reminds the neighbour and then has a change of heart and fell absolutely no need for a physical boundary.
Michael Parkes 8.1
Thursday, March 25, 2010
BLOG 4 - She who knows no Boundaries (By: LaTiefa Alston)
- Emotional Boundaries
- Moral Boundaries
- Spiritual Boundaries
Eg. Stanza six:
‘...I have grown to be
A proud spelman women
With a spiritual base,
Who isn’t quite religious,
But won’t forget who’s in control’
This poem is told in first person and uses the repetition of ‘I’ which confirms that the speaker is herself.
Writing techniques include a Subjective Personal Style and an Assertive Strong Tone.
Blog 2 - I Dream a World (By: Langton Hughes)
Eg. Racial Bondaries-
..‘I dream a world where black or white,
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties of the earth
And every man is free’
‘I Dream’ is repetitively used to make a clear statement concerning the fact that what is right cannot always be in reality although we may wish for it to be
BLOG 1 - Mending Wall (By: Robert Frost)
Language Techniques Robert Frost uses includes imagery which occurs in the first few lines in this poem...
“...Something is there that doesn’t love a wall,
That send the frozen-ground-swell under it
And spills the upper boulder in the sun”.
A quote is repeated frequently throughout this poem...
“...Good fences make good neighbours”.
This statement could be used as a mode of sarcasm towards the persona.
It could also be a simile in which it compares people (neighbours) to beings (the fence) which ideally outlines what the rival had wanted the persona to be before the problem was taken further.
She Who Knows No Boundaries- by LaTiefa Alston
Throughout the poem ‘She Who Knows No Boundaries; by LaTiefa Alston, ‘I’ is repeated to affirm that the persona is celebrating her life. She explains how, throughout her childhood, she had strict boundaries to follow. These boundaries shaped her into: the ‘....forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES’ that she is today. Now she has a life, and ‘survival tactics’. She has no boundaries. She is a free woman, who doesn’t care what people think.
The persona explains about how she didn’t have an easy childhood. She had to endeavour many boundaries; such as spiritual, moral, emotional and racial boundaries. An example of a racial boundary in this poem is:
‘went to school where teachers and students feared my “angry Black” presence’
This quote explains how, not only the children and peers, around the persona, but also the teachers, discriminated against her race. This would make it even harder for the persona as, she would have no one to talk to; as, all of them are discriminating against her.
By Annabelle
Mending Wall- Robert Frost
‘There where it is we do not need a wall:
He s all pine and I’m apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
and eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.’
The persona tries to explain, to his neighbour, that a wall is not necessary, but ‘good fences make good neighbours’ is all he gets in return. The persona knows how difficult it is to argue ssso he goes ahead and assists in building the wall. He knows that it is a waste of time...
By Annabelle
Lines Written in Early Spring - William Wordsworth
Limitless boundaries are discovered in the poem ‘Lines Written in Early Spring’ by William Wordsworth. The persona is comparing life in freedom, or nature; to living in a city, where ‘what man has made of man’ surrounds:
‘The birds around me hopped and played,
Their thoughts I cannot measure’
This demonstrates how free, of troubles and boundaries, the birds, representing nature, are.
William Wordsworth used interesting language to keep an interest of the audience.
‘And tis my faith that every flower
Enjoys the air it breathes.’
This use of personification explains how the persona wished her could be free like the flowers in the fields.
by Annabelle
I Dream a World- Langton Hughes
With a hopeful tone, and a subjective, personal style; ‘I Dream A World’ by Langton Hughes explores racial and moral boundaries. The persona of the poem dreams that every single person; no matter what nationality, colour or religion is equal:
‘A world I dream where black or white,
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties of the earth,
And every man is free.’
The persona wants the people of the world, to be grateful, ‘where greed no longer saps the soul’; and happy,
‘Where wretchedness will hang its head
And Joy like a pearl.’
He dreams that one day, the earth will be perfect, or better, in all these ways.
By Annabelle
Blog Four- Lines Written in Early Spring by William Wordsworth
'To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.'
The persona uses pathetic fallacy to show that he is connected to nature in body and soul. He also uses the language technique of pun to identify the link man has broken with nature. The persona uses visual imagery to describe how his eyes see spring.
'The budding twigs spread out their fan,
To catch the breezy air;
And I must think, do all I can,
That there was pleasure there.'
I DREAM A WORLD
a subjective style is used and gives the persona a opinionative feel.
Langton Hughes uses alot of repition throughout to give his peom more effect and strength.
very strong racial boundaries are touched apon where th epersona quote
"a world i dream where black or white"
this explores a fragile subject and creates the illusion he is very much involed in creating an equall and fair worl for all.
Blog Three- Mending Wall by Robert Frost
'There where it is we do not need the wall:
He is all pine and I am apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.'
The persona is most certainly against the idea of a wall and thinks it is useless. The persona thinks that human interaction and co-operation more vital.
'Before I build a wall I'd ask to know,
what I was walling in or walling out,
And to whom I was giving offence.
LINES WRITTEN IN EARLY SPRING
a good language technique shown is pathetic fallacy in which the reader is drawn to see how the persona has a strong focus on nature and its inhabitants.
for example;
to her fair works did nature link,
the human soul that ran through me.
this particular peom is written in first person and shows how much the persona is focused on nature an dtreating it well.
Blog Two- I Dream a World by Langton Hughes
' I dream a world where man
No other man will scorn,
I dream a world where all will know sweet freedom's way,'
The persona uses the technique of repition to make his point strong and clear. The persona uses simile to describe the world he dreams of.
'And joy, like a pearl,
Attends the needs of all mankind--'
MENDING WALL
an example of a language techniques used in the poem is visual imagery
"that sends the frozen ground swell under it and spills the upper boulder in the sun"
this poem is empathetic, subjective and easily understood.
Blog One- 'She Who Knows No Boundaries' by LaTiefa Alston
' I lived where the village raised the child,
Went to school where the students and teachers feared my "angry Black"
presence'
The pesona has obviously had to over come many boundaries during her childhood, incuding racial boundaries at school. The persona draws on her emotions from the past to help her be what she is today.
'It is with these ideas and this understanding of myself
That I have grown into
What my name and survival tactics have produced ...
'She Who Knows No boundaries'
'I have grown to be
A proud Spelman based women
With a spiritual base,
Who isn't quite religious,
But won't forget who's in charge.'
'I was taught to love the lord,
Have always known and given unconditional love,
And am finally learning to love myself.'
The persona strongly believes that she is an individual that knows no boundaries. LaTiefa uses visual image to descibe the persona's mother. The use of the repetition of 'I' expresses the persona's feelings in a personal style.
'I was born...
I lived...
I have...
I was taught...
I have grown...
I live by...'
'I was raised by a...
Strong, religious, educated,
"I marched on Washington and take nothing from no one"
Type of woman.'
Wednesday, March 24, 2010
'Lines Written in Early Spring'
'The birds around me hoped and played,
Their thoughts i can not measure:-
But the least motion which they made
It seemed a thrill of pleasure.'
The persona uses pathetic fallacy, to show how he is liked to nature. And also uses the technique of a pun to explain the effects man has on nature, which is breaking the link.
'To her fair works did nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.'
The persona speaks in a a subjective tone to express his feelings in personal manner. Wordsworth uses visual image to describe spring.
'The budding twigs spread out their fan.'
'I dream a world'
'Where greed no longer saps the soul,
Nor avarice blights our day.'
'A world I dream where black or white,
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties on the earth.'
The persona uses the repetition of 'I dream a world' to make his view on the world clear. The use of simile compares joy the emotion, to a physical pearl. Hughes uses visual imagery to describe what he believes is a peaceful world.
'And joy, like a pearl.'
'Where love will bless the earth
And peace its paths adorn.'
by Hayley Bard
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
SHE KNOWS NO BOUNDARIES
the poet uses the repetition of "I" which affirms the speaker celebartes her life.
moral boundaries,spiritual boundaries and emotional boundaries are touched apon throughout the poem but the main thing that made this poem great was the empathetic ending
"A forthright,dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!"
Monday, March 22, 2010
She Who Knows No Boundaries’ by LaTiefa Alston
The persona explains about how she didn’t have an easy childhood. She had to endeavour many boundaries; such as spiritual, moral, emotional and racial boundaries. An example of the racial boundaries in the poem is:
‘went to school where teachers and students feared my “angry Black”
presence’
This quote explains how not only the children and peers around the persona, but also the teachers, discriminated against her race. This would make it even harder for the persona as, she would have no one to talk to as; all of them are discriminating against her.
by Annabelle Lambert
"Mending Wall" by Robert Frost
“That sends the frozen-ground-swell under it
And spills he upper boulder in the sun,”
The tone is sarcastic and the style is subjective and personal. Robert Frost also uses pathetic fallacy to explain how the persona is feeling.
“Spring is the mischief in me…..”
"Lines Written in Early Spring"
An example of a mental boundary is
"The birds around me hopped and played
Their thoughts I cannot measure."
The persona believes that the birds have no boundaries because they are free in nature.
An example of an emotional boundary is
"And much it grieved my heart to think
What man as made of man"
The persona feels that the effects of modernisation have put a boundary between us and the link of nature.
Visual Imagery is used in the poem.
"The budding twigs spread out their fan
To catch the breezy air"
This is an image of spring.
Pathetic fallacy is also used in the poem.
"To her fair works did nature link"
This is telling me that the persona feels linked to nature.
Saturday, March 20, 2010
"I Dream A World" by Langton Hughes
"Where wretchedness will hang its head"
The persona's tone is hopeful and idealistic. He uses a simple simile to describe his joy.
"And joy, like a pearl"
By Sarah Newcombe
"She Who Knows No Boundaries" - LaTiefa Alston
There are different boundaries that are mentioned in this poem. The first is the emotional boundary. The emotional boundary tells the reader about the love the persona learned towards others and then finally learning to love herself.
"Lines Written In Early Spring" by William Wordsworth
"And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man."
The persona uses pathetic fallacy to explain how he is feeling.
"To her fair works did nature like
The human soul that through me ran;"
By Sarah Newcombe
Thursday, March 18, 2010
"Lines written in early spring" by William Wordsworth
The persona seems quite confused and upset about the effects of modernisation on nature.
"Mending Wall" by Robert Frost
The title "Mending Wall" is referred to in the poem as both a physical and metaphorical wall. The physical is obviously the wall that they build to keep each other out. The metaphorical is the distance that the neighbour likes to keep between himself and the persona. His neighbour expresses this clearly in the following quote from the poem.
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
"She Who Knows No Boundaries" - Blog 4
The persona has used a subjective/ personal tone to show her point of view. The tone used is strong and assertive.
I was born into a . . .
“Come correct or don’t come at all,"
“Accept nothing but the best,”
“If he can’t use your comb, don’t bring him home,”
Kind of family.
The persona uses half-completed sentences as the first line of each stanza as a way of drawing the reader towards the point she is making. Another technique incorporated into the first line of each stanza is the repetition of the I, where she affirms her individuality.
I was raised by a. . .
Strong, religious, educated,
“I marched on Washington and take nothing from no one”
Type of woman.
An empathic conclusion has been used to emphasise how she successfully dealt with the boundaries in her life.
A forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!
By Tiffani.Mungoven
Lines Written in Early Spring, by William Wordsworth
He uses imagery to describe the look of Spring and give the reader a clear, peaceful image in their mind:
The persona uses pathetic fallacy to describe his feelings about how modernism has destroyed the link with nature and man:
Lines Written In Early Spring by William Wordsworth
This poem is directly linked with nature and how man has made a wreck of it.
Is a line said repeatedly through the poem asking what man has doen to man. How has man ruined man and nature?
Throughout the poem the persona feels linked to nature with is a pathetic fallacy
The effects of modernisation have nearly destroyed the link with nature, although we humans are nature itself. We are forming a boundarie with nature but were also forming a boundarie within ourselves.
The persona states that birds have no boundaries because they are free to fly and do as they please but humans are trapped to do what other man has done beore them.
Shows the imagery of spring.
The persona knows he can make a positvie or a negative out of this experiance. Heaven/Hell.
William Wordsworth ends with the shocking statement he has put throughout his poem
I Dream a World, By Langton Hughes.
“She Who Knows No Boundaries” by LaTiefa Alston
“I was raised by a…”
“I was born into a …”
“I have grown to be…”
“I live by the rules of…”
The repetition of “I” affirms that the persona is trying to make a clear statement of her life, conveying her personal boundaries, one being her moral limitations; “I live by the rules of…” Her moral boundaries are the foundation of her personality, perspective and opinion on life, expressed throughout the poem in a personal and subjective style.
Racial boundaries are apparent when the persona expresses the saddening truth of how she was discriminated against at school;
“Went to school where the students and teachers feared my “angry Black” presence”
This type of boundary is not only highlighting the fact that racial prejudice is an issue in America, but it is also relating to the persona’s emotional boundaries in the sense that being treated in such an unjust manner is quite upsetting and infuriating, causing her “angry black” presence.
Spiritual boundaries are also stated by the persona;
“With a spiritual base,
Who isn’t quite religious,
But won’t forget who’s in control.”
Being grown and raised by a religious “I marched on Washington and take nothing from no one” type of woman, the persona feels that she too “won’t forget who is in control.” This expresses spiritual boundaries, as it is conveying the persona’s perception on how she stands in the world. Her outlook on life is the spiritual base of her moral boundaries, caused from growing up being taught the rule of “Remembering who I am and what I represent.”
It is from these boundaries, ideas and the persona’s viewpoint of her place in the world that have caused her to grow into “A forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!” La Tiefa has chosen this forceful ending to emphasize the persona’s personal and family inflicted boundaries that make her the way she is.
I Dream A World by Langton Hughes
He has wirtten a poem about all the boundaries that have put up over the years and now "he deams' tht\at they will be taken down
He uses a rhyme scheme of: abcb. Which makes the poem easy to follow with.
The style he writes is mainly subjective and personal, although the tone is very hopeful.
To make his statements very clear he uses repitition, which brings out what he is trying to say much more clearly.
"She Who Knows No Boundaries"
Throughout the poem there is a repetition of "I".
I was raised by a ...
I was born into a ...
I lived where the...
I have tried to...
I was taught to...
I have grown to be...
I lived by the rules of ...
This is used to make the statements very clear and to celebrate the speakers life.
There is also a emphatic conclution in the poem.
A forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!
The speaker has done this to make her statement very clear and she is saying that she is a dedicated individual so she knows no boundaries.
She Who Knows No Boundaries, By LaTiefa Alston
The way she uses repetition of "I" tells you that it is about her own life personally and really gives it meaning and understanding:
The author also makes the ending really emphatic with the conclusion:
"A fortnight, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!"
That conclusion really emphasizes her good frame of mind and helps you imagine the way she thinks about boundaries and her childhood.
By Kaylee Ayscough
She Who Knows No Boundaries by LaTiefa Alston
Lines Written in Early Spring
'The birds around me hopped and played
Their thoughts i cannot measure:-
But the least motion which they made
It seemed a thrill of pleasure'
The Pathetic Fallacy is used in this poem. The persona thinks that his feeling are linked to nature
'To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man'
The line 'What man had made of man' is a pun for 'man made'. It shows the effects of modernisation have destroyed the link with nature.
She Who Knows No Boundaries by LaTiefa Alstin
'Mending Wall' by Robert Frost
“I Dream a World” by Langton Hughes
“A world I dream where black or white,
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties of the earth
And every man is free” (9-12)
The persona dreams of a world where no racial boundaries are apparent and we all live in harmony and freedom. The persona’s optimistic tone in this verse conveys the fact that the reality of racial prejudice in society, interferes with such a dream. The use of the “abcb” rhyming scheme allows the audience to easily follow the poem because of the rhythmic flow.
Langton uses personification to express the persona’s moral opinion of greediness;
“Where greed no longer saps the soul”
The use of personification conveys how there is a greater meaning to the line, as greed weakens one’s spirit and character. This conveys a moral boundary, knowing that greediness isn’t a fine quality in a person.
Langton uses repetition to make a clear, strong statement throughout “I Dream a World”;
“I dream a world where.....”
The use of repetition creates a deeper understanding of the persona’s perspective of the “perfect world” and emphasizes the meaning of the name of the poem; “I Dream a World.”
Personification was used again in the poem, to create a more vivid description of an inanimate object;
“Where wretchedness will hang its head”
This is an example of personification, as it is giving an abstract noun (wretchedness) a human quality (hanging its head). The use of personification enhances our mind to connect ideas and images and to think deeper of the true meaning.
By Abby Sutherland
Mending Wall-Robert Frost
The fact that the two men only come together to fix a wall that is to keep them apart is an example of situational irony. The writer is sarcastic about the other man’s traditional ways and believes that they do not need a wall,
‘There where it is we do not need the wall: He is all pine and I am apple orchard. My apple trees will never get across and eat the cones under his pines, I tell him. He only says, 'Good fences make good neighbours.'
The writer uses similes and allusions to make the reader understand what he is trying to express. The writer believes that the mending of the wall is just another game and that the traditional neighbour is fixed in his old ways, almost like a caveman.
‘Oh, just another kind of out-door game, One on a side. It comes to little more:’
‘Bringing a stone grasped firmly by the top In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed. He moves in darkness as it seems to me’
“I Dream a World” by Langton Hughes
This poem doesn't exactly have boundaries, it explores a world where man has made his own boundaries. to explain this William uses a pun:
I Dream a World-Langton Hughes
The writer uses repetition to make the statement 'I Dream a World' clear to the reader. He also uses similes to make the point clearer e.g. hopefulness.
‘Where wretchedness will hang its head
And joy, like a pearl.
Attends the needs of all mankind—
Of such I dream, my world!’
The style it is written in is subjective and personal and the tone is hopeful to show that the writer believes that the wrongs pointed out in the poem can be righted. He makes this clear in the first few lines by stating,
‘I dream a world where man
No other man will scorn,
Where love will bless the earth
And peace its paths adorn.’
She Who Knows No Boundaries
'I was taught to love the Lord
Have always known and given unconditional love
And am finally learning to love myself.'
Another type of boundary in this poem is moral boundaries. An example of this is:
'I live by the rules of...
Treating others as i want to be treated
Remembering who i am and what i represent
And understanding that "To whom much is given, much is required"
The syle of this text is subjective personal and the tone is assertive and strong.
"I Dream a World" - Langton Hughes
Different types of boundaries are illustrated throughout the poem. A moral boundary is one of the boundaries displayed in this poem.
Tuesday, March 16, 2010
"I Dream A World"- Blog 3
The persona has used the rhyme scheme: abcb to make the poem sound like it belongs.
A world I dream where black or white,
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties of the earth
And every man is free,
The style of this poem is subjective and personal as it shows what type of world Langton Hughes desires. He has made this ambitious statement clear by using repetition at the beginning of the first and second stanza.
I dream a world where manNo other man will scorn,
Where love will bless the earth
And peace its path adorn.
I dream a world where all sweet freedom’s way,
Where greed no longer saps the soul
Nor avarice blights our day
A simile has been used to differentiate a positive (happy) and negative (sad) emotional state.
Where wretchedness will hang its head
And joy, like a pearl,
By Tiffani.Mungoven
"I Dream A World" by Langton Hughes
The repetition of "I dream a world" is there to make the statement clear.
Monday, March 15, 2010
I Dream a World
Repetition is used to make a clear statement. Example:
"I dream a world..."
"I dream a world..."
"I dream a world..."
Another language technique used in this poem is a simile. Example:
"And joy, like a pearl"
The style of language used is subjective, personal and the tone that is used is hopeful.
There is different boundaries that are mentioned in this text. One of these is moral boundaries. Example:
"Where greed no longer saps our soul
Nor avarice blights our day"
Another boundary in this text is a racial boundaries. Example:
"A world I dream where black or white
Whatever race you be
Will share the bounties of the earth
And every man is free"
LaTiefa Alston's - She Know No Boundaries
I was born into a...
I lived where the village raised the children,
I have tried to...
Remembering who I am and what I represent,
And understanding that "to whom much is given, much is required"
Have always known and given unconditional love,
And am finally learning to love myself.
Langston Hughes' - I Dream a World
Whatever race you be,
Will share the bounties of the earth
And every man is free
Mending Wall
Situational Irony is used in this poem. This is when the opposite happens to what was intended. The two men come together to keep each other apart. Example:
' And on a day we meet to walk the line
And set the wall between us once again'
The Pathetic Fallacy is also used. This is saying that your feelings imitate nature. Example:
'Spring is the mischief in me'
William Wordsworth's - Lines Written in Early Spring
To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
What man has made of man
Through primrose tufts, in that green bower
Blog 4.
For Example:
This example shows the readers the love that she has accepted, through everything she's been through.
LaTeifa Alston uses repitition of 'I'. This confirms that the speaker is celebrating her life.
For Example:
Sunday, March 14, 2010
"Mending Wall" by Robert Frost.
A language technique used in the poem is a simile.
Robert Frost's - Mending Wall
He is all pine and I am apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.
He only says, "Good fences make good neighbors."
In each hand, like an old-stone savage armed.
He moves in darkness as it seems to me,
"She Who Knows No Boundaries," by LaTefia Alson
"A proud Spelman woman,
With a spiritual base,
Who isn't quite religious,
But wont forget whose in control"
The way the persona has been brought up throughout her life has impacted on the way she is today. She is: "A forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES!!!' meaning that she could go anywhere in life."
By Sarah Newcombe
The poem "She Knows No Boundaries" by La Tiefo Alston made note of the emotional, moral and spiritual boundaries. The style of the poem is subjective and personal, and the tone is strong. It's about a girl who know no limits or boundaries.
"A forthright, dedicated individual who knows NO BOUNDARIES"
The language techniques are the constant repetitionof I which means the speaker is her and celebrating her life.
"I was raised by a..., I was born into a..."
The poem "Mending Wall" by Robert frost illuminates mental and physical boundaries. The style of the peom is subjective and personal, and the tone is sarcastic.
"Good fences make good neighbours"
Visual imagery was used at the start of the poem referring to the destruction of the wall, exaggeration was used and situational irony.
"Stay where you are until our backs are turned"
The poem "Lines Written In Early Spring" by William Wordsworth explores emotional and moral boundaries. The language of the poem is subjective and personal, and the tone of the poem is negative.
"While in a grove I sate reclined bringing sad thoughts to my mind"
The persona feels lined to nature which is the Pathetic Fallacy. The poet also uses visual imagery referring to the image of spring.
"The budding twigs spread out their fan"
Saturday, March 13, 2010
The poem "I dream a world" by Langton Hughes explores the moral and racial boundaries. The style of the poem is subjective and personal, and the tone is hopeful. The poem is about a man who dreams a world of freedom, peace and blessings.
" Where love will bless the earth and peace it's paths adorn"
The persona wants a perfect a world with no limits or boundaries. Langton Hughes uses language techniques such as a simile and a rhyme scheme.
"And joy, like a pearl"
"Lines Written in Early Spring" - William Wordsworth
There are different boundaries mentioned in this poem. Environmental boundaries are mentioned in this poem as the persona is explaining what man has done to the environment. The persona believes that man is destroying the environment when they build large cities.
The persona has used captivating language techniques in this poem. The poem contains uses a pathetic fallacy to show that his mood reflects the weather.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
"Lines Written In Early Spring"- Blog 2
The persona uses personification by which he gives nature the ability to create links with the human soul. The Pathetic Fallacy has also been used by the way the persona feels linked to nature.
To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
Personification is used again in the third and fourth stanza when flowers are endowed with particular human abilities such as breathing and enjoying and the birds hopping playing which might be pleasurable for them. He suggests that the birds have no boundaries because they are free in nature.
And ‘tis my faith that every flower
Enjoys the air it breathes.
The birds around me hopped and played,
Their thoughts I cannot measure:
But the least motion which they made
It seemed a thrill of pleasure.
A pun is used to describe the effects of modernisation, which has destroyed the link with nature. The persona wonders about the directions taken by mankind, as he does again at the end of the poem.
What man has made of man?
By Tiffani.Mungoven
Tuesday, March 9, 2010
Blog 3.
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Also William uses persona to feel like people are linked to nature.
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Blog 2
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"Lines Written in Early Spring" by William Wordsworth
"To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man." (5-8)
The persona feels linked to nature (pathetic fallacy) and believes that the effect of modernisation (factories and buildings) has destroyed that special connection with nature.
The persona also describes limitless boundaries, but speaks in a more enlightened tone;
"The birds around me hopped and played,
Their thoughts I cannot measure: -
But the least motion which they made
It seemed a thrill of pleasure." (13-16)
The persona feels that the birds have no boundaries because they are free in their own environment.
Wordsworth has used vivid, visual imagery to describe spring in the poem;
"The budding twigs spread out their fan,
To catch the breezy air;" (17-18)
Even though the environment is changing, the persona still sees the beauty of nature, especially in spring, the time of new life and blossoming flora.
To end the poem, Wordsworth emphasizes the last two lines on his concerns for the future;
"Have I not reason to lament
What man has made of man?"